Thursday, March 22, 2012

Utilizing Structure and Diction in When We Two Parted

While the poem “as we two parted” seems simple at first glance, I would argue that there is a great deal more going on than one would initially think. Even though Byron uses very few words as he addresses his general relationship rather indirectly, he somehow manages to convey a great deal about their circumstances in what appears to be rather vague language. We can tell that the two had an illicit affair unbeknownst to their social circle, including even his lover’s close friends, and upon the termination of their relationship he muses about how he both loves her and resents her for abandoning him. I think the form of the poem is very fitting for the content. The way the speaker portrays his account mirrors the relationship would be viewed by others – from outsiders’ perspectives, his friends have no idea that the two were intimate and wouldn’t even think to consider their relationship. The short lines and singsong quality of the poem causes you to run through it quickly and gloss over the details. Even though the poem seems shallow the diction is so expressive - I love the tension between imagery of cold detachment that a bystander would observe between them and the violent physicality of his emotions. Even though he is extremely emotionally distraught over a connection that was very meaningful to him he must make it appear as if their relationship was as shallow as the surface level of the poem.

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